billy-persistent's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bread With Jam]

The music is okay, it sounds too much like something made in fl studio however (change the synthesizer's settings or make your own with audio clip). Collision is quite bad, and hitting most solid objects mid jump give you a HUGE boost. I assume this is something to do with incrementing a value every time space is pressed and the player is touching an object (if that's the case just make sure it only does this when you're not already jumping). The enemies are simple (not a bad thing), too small, and suffer from the same collision problems as everything else in this game. The art is fine, but some things have a much higher resolution than others. Also, there's a sizable beginning portion in which the player has no inclination to use the attack.

Java-N responds:

Thanks for your feedback :) I have made some improvements in the game, feel free to try it again, I hope this time you enjoy it more, thanks

[Slice Fractions:Experimental]

I really like the concept and the game does a great job of iterating on it! The art style's nice as well, though it looks a bit incomplete. However I despise the hints! They break the flow of gameplay and make this already simple puzzler too easy. I also couldn't find a way to turn them off... this is an addition this game needs and I would recommend not making the hints default either!

Ululab responds:

Good suggestion, thanks!

[Heli-Fella]

Wow! The atmosphere is great! I love the music and the art! If only there was more content. Also, just a side thought; maybe a background that scrolls down to make it seem even faster. I don't know much about art, but to me that would be really cool. Just a pattern of gray would be enough! (Another thing I notice is that our games seem to be oppositely bent. What I mean is, your game has great art music and style, while my game looks like ****, but has a complex original concept.) Keep adding more, I quite like it!

hackD3v responds:

Thanks man, if you saw the original you'd know why I removed the background, got a lil "Trippy" but I am working on ways to implement it. And speaking of music I was gonna make somewhat rythm based but that's not too original.